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Re: What is your New Year's YWS Resolution?
I've only got one. That's to be around a bit more, considering I drifted away during the summer.
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Skin Deep
This is an interesting piece. I like the re-occurring theme of plastic you have going on here, and think that this poem could be greatly strengthened if you try to ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Bridge of Sighs
They met on the bridge, as they always had, the man in white and the man in blue. They had done this almost since the beginning, when the stars themselves ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: With Much Regret, I Do
I said I would review this, so here I am, lol. I can really feel the passion that you have for the topic in this poem. You've managed to inject ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Scabbards
Hi there. I thought I would stop by and give you a quick review. So, this story has quite a bit of potential to it. It's plain that you know ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Pinky Promise
Hi there. Just thought I would stop in and give this a review. So, it's a nice little story. I like the way you got the character interactions nailed down, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Countdown
Hi there. Just thought that I would drop in and give this a quick review. So, I really like this. The main reason for that is you nailed at least ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: In-Flight (The Letter)
Hi there. Thought I would pop in and give this a quick review. So, first off I have to say that you show you have quite a bit of writing ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: People You Just Feel You Should Write About
Do you ever just see someone and think to yourself, “I need to write their story.”? No. Ditto.
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: A Glimpse of Death (ten times new and improved :D)
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a quick review. So, you've got a nice base here. I like it quite a bit. But I really ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Of A Rose
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I like the imagery that you're conjuring up with this. It's quite lovely on its own. ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: What they are
Hi there! Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, I have to admit that I liked the imagery you invoked when you talked about them flying ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Love Will Save The Day
Hi there. Just thought I would stop by and give this a review. They had Christian's service on a rainy afternoon. All right, I already have something to say about ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Death's Riddle
Smitty found himself in an odd place, or at least it was odd considering where he had been moments before. He was standing in an office, whereas he had been ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: dolphin marriage
tonight we cannot stop the party ocean promenade beneath the waves it's a dolphin marriage and it's a lively affair, my friends they chirp and laugh so loudly your ears ...
May 23, 2010
